Homework, anyone help please. (:?

If you want to describe someone, do it through someone else's eyes or have the character look at herself in a mirror, rather than just describe her yourself. "The woman was dressed in black and white : white tailored suit with black trim, black handbag, black shoes. Jake thought she looked as if she was going for an interview and he smiled a little, for the woman lived down his road and usually she looked as if she'd got dressed in the dark and grabbed the nearest clothes available. What she was called or what she did for a living, he had no idea".